I almost scrapped Golem as my nano project. Really, I almost tossed all the prep and
started over with the Sci Fi Bunny. And
it's all the fault of the research.
I'm setting Golem in a very real place, with very real
history and very real. And very, very
not Happy Ever After. Anyone who knows
me knows that I go more for the sweet and less for the horror. But there are parts of this story that *has*
to be almost if not Horror.
Because 400 people, 300 of them Jews, died in a riot where
very angry people focused their anger on those people who were different from
them. Jewish homes and businesses were
destroyed. Jewish women and children
were beaten.
I knew that *my* story would have a happy-ish ending, but it
couldn't completely be very happy, because I won't be rewriting history. I just didn't think I could spend 50,000
words with such a depressing story.
In talking things over with a friend, she suggested that I
write the sweet part of the story for a bit and maybe I'd feel better about
it. I tried and she's right.
But I'm coming to the conclusion that the story is stronger
because of the contrast between light and dark.
You care more about the dark because you care about the characters. And I, at least, care about the characters
because they're really very sweet.
A short snip:
Mr. Grabel walked into
the study, twisting his hat in his hands. "I don't want to be any trouble,
Rabbi."
"No
trouble," I said. Mr. Grabel was a
large, imposing man, but with my father, he acted like a young boy. "The kettle is on already. Do you take milk?"
He smiled shyly, even
though his middle daughter was my best friend.
He'd known me all my life.
"A little honey, if you have it.
Thank you, Rachel."
Metrics:
Nano – Three days (I haven't really written much tonight):
5,832 words
Plan for this weekend: Spiders!
Contrast is important, isn't it? I remember when, as a girl, I read a Trixie Belden mystery, and this woman was explaining to her that it was important to have a mix of colors for a crazy quilt because the dark colors made the bright ones stand out better, like dark days made the happy ones more memorable. Don't remember much else from that book, but that analogy stayed with me.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the Golem story.
I love it Erin - excellent image.
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