Shake Down is read through - it's going to need a large chunk of time and a flow chart to work on the plot. I've got it penciled in for tomorrow afternoon. I need to introduce at least one villain much earlier than he is currently introduced, among other things. And one other villain is going to be much less villainous and more mysterious.
A couple of my beta readers came back with some really good points, so I'm tweaking Lawgiver some more.
I've done a bunch of cooking - committed paella last week - and I need to clean my bedroom and do some painting during this bit of vacation.
And that's the update, delayed though it might be :D
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